Today we showcased our video to the rest of our media class. We received helpful feedback from our peers to help us improve our work. the feedback we received was as we expected and a little more, when we showcased our production we hadn't finished it completely, so the obvious main point expressed to us was to complete the production which was clear to us anyway. We was also told to improve the editing in certain parts of the film to make them more sharp.
When we created the story line we got so carried away with the concept of 3 girls dating the same girl we forgot about the ending, so originally we didn't have a narrative arch. This meant we had to return to filming and capture some footage to create a narrative arch. This was not a problem because we had the room and the facilities to do so on the school field without having to go back to London.
The feedback we received overall was extremely helpful and we was able to go back and amend the problems that were mentioned.
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